Help with English cover letter for a friend

[eloic]

Hi,

A friend of mine asked me for help, to review a cover letter he wrote.

I already proofread the document and made some changes, but I wonder if any of you English native speakers (preferably British) can help me and check it up, in which case I would send you the text by PM.

Thank you!

 

[Davros]

I'll give it ago

 

[eloic]

I'll give it ago

Thank you for your help! You've got a PM.

 

[benroveno]

Good job dude for helping him! You just earned one point of good deed. Earn more and you can gain upgrades to your weapons.